Facts about Short Film Coming
# 1 ... student film makers sila in fictional story, ewan ko lang kung may gumagawa nito in real life ... so far, ang 2nd story (" Ang Pagbabalik ") eh yung istorya nung mga estudyante dati na pinatay tapos inuulit lang nila Christoper ... and in the end, ganun din naging kapalaran nila
# 2 ... meron akong naging kaklase dati na L.V.S. ang initials kaya ang tawag namin sa kanya, Elvis
# 3 ... I got the idea of this sketch nung nasa Don Bosco pa ko ... may kaibigan kasi akong nag-aaral sa vocational school din don tapos may teacher daw silang pari na sobrang gwapo daw ... lahat ng mga estudyante nya, tinatanong daw sa kanya kung bakit sya nagpari, nakakapanghinayang daw itsura nya
... anyway, dito ko na-apply yung kwento na yon
Originally Posted on ...
- January 12, 2009
(outside the church)
(may naglalakad na pari papalayo sa background … hinabol ni Ann yung gwapung-gwapong binatang pari na may hawak na biblia)
< Ann > : (kinausap camera man) eto ba yon? eto ba yung sinasabi ng mga nagsisimba?
(sinabayan sa paglalakad)
< Ann > : um, excuse me po Father
< Priest > : ..?
< Ann > : totoo po pala sinasabi nila, ang gwapo-gwapo nyo po talaga
< Priest > : (natawa)
< Ann > : ang dapat sa inyo, naggi-girlfriend … naisip nyo po ba yon?
(they stop walking)
< Priest > : iha, ang misyon ko sa buhay, ay magpayo sa maraming nangangailangan na tao patungo sa mabuting landas, masaya na ko sa ganitong paraan
< Ann > : pero Father kung papipiliin lang po talaga kayo, kunwari lang, kunwari lang, ano po ang gusto nyo pong babae? may kakilala ako na super ganda gusto nyong …
< Priest > : (nangingite … naisip biruin si Ann) o sige teka … ang gusto ko sana six footer na babae (then natawa)
< Ann > : six footer na babae? walang problema, (may kinausap na iba) palapitin yan dito
< Priest > : ..?
(may lumapit na six footer na model na babae na naka-bikini … tumabi kay Father)
< Model > : (ngumiti kay Father)
< Ann > : maganda di ba?
< Priest > : pero gusto ko foreigner (natawa ulit)
< Ann > : meron din kami, meron din kami nun … palapitin yung foreigner
< Priest > : meron din kayo?
(may lumapit na foreigner model na babae na six footer din, nakasuot ng bikini … tumabi kay Father)
< Foreigner model > : (kiniss pisngi ni Father)
< Unang Model > : (kumiss din sa pisngi ni Father)
< Priest > : (natawa)
< Ann > : sabihin mo … ayoko nang, magpari, ayoko nang magpari sabihin mo, sige na po Father
< Priest > : (nangingite) … ang pinakagusto ko sana yung, tatlo mata, may kaliskis, tapos lumilipad
< Ann > : walang problema … sige, palapitin din yan
< Priest > : hala! meron din? (tingin naman)
< Ann > : wala … joke lang, syempre walang ganun … bakit sila? magaganda naman sila ah, di ba?
< Priest > : (tinignan yung mga model tapos natatawa … then agreeing yes)
< Models > : (tumawa rin)
< Ann > : so anong opinyon nyo muna po sa pulitika ngayon?
< Priest > : ah--- (then talk about the politics but muted, just talking gestures)
< Ann’s voice as Narrator > : ang masasabi ko, promote love
(print on screen … PROMOTE LOVE)
< Ann’s voice as Narrator > : … mas may payapa kapag ganito at sigurado, hindi na sya kristyano mamayang gabi, muwahahahahahahahaha
# 4 ... sa second story, kababata ni Christoper sina Rex at Anton ... naging kaibigan lang ni Christoper si Elvis sa school kasi parehas ng course
# 5 ... ang profile ni Ann sa istorya, kinuha ko sa image ni Anne Curtis
Originally posted on ...
- December 18, 2008
(campus)
(Ann and Christoper walking)
< Ann > : … mag-shift kaya ako ng course
< Christoper > : ba’t ano bang gusto mong kunin?
< Ann > : gusto ko sanang maging astronaut … may course ba nun?
< Christoper > : astrology yata kailangan don
< Ann > : eh ano ba yung cosmetology? Di ba sa rootword ng cosmonaut yun?
< Christoper > : malay ko … ako, pagka-graduate ko, mag-aapply ako ng presidente ng kumpanya
< Ann > : pwede, magtayo ka ng sariling kumpanya, ikaw ang …
< Christoper > : hinde, yung mag-aapply … halimbawa sa Nokia … o kaya sa Porsche
(Warren approaches)
< Warren > : Tupe, Final Fantasy mo (binigay yung PS2 na bala)
< Christoper > : ay! Nakalimutan ko, bukas, bukas talaga
< Warren > : Guilty Gear saka Shadow Hearts
< Christoper > : o sige … teka (nilagay sa loob yung bala) … may sinuli sa kin si Johanson, eto na muna sayo (may kinuha sa bag tapos napansin si Ann)
< Ann > : … (smiling big while staring at Warren)
< Christoper > : ay … kaklase ko, kaibigan ko, kaibigan ko, kaklase ko
< Warren > : hi
< Ann > : … (smiling big, no response)
< Warren > : Warren, kamusta (offer hand)
< Ann > : Ann (shakehands then laugh loudly)
< Christoper > : (binigay yung PS2 na bala) … ingatan mo yan
< Warren > : oo ba … yung dalawa pang bala bukas, kukunin ko pa rin … sige … Ann sige (then leave)
< Ann > : … (still smiling big)
< Christoper > : huy! (siniko nang mahina si Ann)
< Ann > : (inamoy yung kamay) hmm— ang bango … hindi na ko maliligo, habang— buhay
< Christoper > : (tinitignan loob ng CD case) walang laman to ah (tapos tinignan yung cover ng case) … hindi Final Fantasy pala, nasan na yun?
< Ann > : wag kang maingay … imaginary boyfriend ko yun
< Christoper > : huh!? Akala ko ba ako?
< Ann > : pangatlo ka … pangalawa si Elmo
< Christoper > : (natawa) … si Elmo (then imporsination of Elmo sa kamay nya) hahahahaha (ginaya tawa ni Elmo)
< Ann > : mali naman to
< Christoper > : eh pano ba? (then snakebite sa mukha ni Ann) hiss!
< Ann > : ano ba
(the day after)
(campus corridor)
(class dismissal of students, one of them is Nelson going out of the room)
< Ann > : (sumulpot bigla) Nelson!
< Nelson > : ..?
< Ann > : samahan mo muna ako
< Nelson > : hindi pwede, marami pa kong gagawin
< Ann > : hindi basta, sandali lang to … doon lang tayo sa room ni Christoper dali (hinila si Nelson)
< Nelson > : teka
(other location)
(Ann and Nelson, waiting for Christoper to come out one of the dismissing students from the room)
< Ann > : … ayan na si Christoper tara (hila ulit kay Nelson)
< Christoper > : … (paalis na sana)
(humarang si Ann sa harap ni Christoper)
< Ann > : (faking tone) ano yun Nelson? Hindi ako maganda? (then fake na iyak)
< Nelson > : … (awkward face)
< Ann > : ba’t mo naman sinabi yon? Masakit para sa akin yon kala mo (fake na iyak ulit)
< Nelson > : pero wala naman akong sinasabing …
< Ann > : (sigaw bigla) ayoko nang marinig mga dahilan mo! Umalis ka na!
< Nelson > : ..!
< Ann > : ayaw na kitang makita ngayon, kahapon, at tatlong taon bago ka ipinanganak! Umalis ka na! alis na! sipain pa kita eh
< Nelson > : … (umalis na lang)
< Ann > : … (galit pa rin tignan) wag ka ring magpapakita bukas! … itsura nito (then flip hair) … o Christoper, nandyan ka pala! (then nalungkot)
< Christoper > : inaway ka ba ni Nelson
< Ann > : oo nga eh, tulad pa rin nung dati, ang sama-sama nya talaga
< Christoper > : si Nelson?
< Ann > : pwede bang makisabay muna sayo? Baka kasi inaabangan ako ni Nelson sa hallway, bugbugin ako
< Christoper > : … (awkward face) o sige
< Ann > : tara na! (happy agad)
(they now walk)
< Ann > : ngayon ulit kayo magkikita ni Warren di ba?
< Christoper > : … (awkward face) oo
< Ann > : yes! buti naman (then nag-pocket powder)
< Christoper > : … ang alam ko, sabi ni Mia dati, may boyfriend ka na
< Ann > : meron nga (habang naglalagay ng lip balm)
< Christoper > : …
# 6 ... here are some of the messages I received so far in the second story up till now
I would like to share my point of view to all of you and feel free to comment more after reading this, taanx
= = Reader's Corner = =
@ SiakniSiak
- Quote :
- okay
nice lang ba
@ tUs0
- Quote :
- Kabadingan pala .!
variety of comedy is good...
@ SamLowry
- Quote :
- W.t.f.i.t.s?
I'll pretend you didn't mean " what the fuc5 is this s#it? "
instead, you just said
Where The Flamingo Is The Source
of this amazing story?
why thank you kind sir ... just click below FOR ALL CHAPTERS
@ Oneiros
- Quote :
- I am not the TS's agent or editor so I am not obliged to give constructive criticism (for free).
With that said, after 3 chapters, I can honestly say I've read better crap.
ey!
you sons of *****!
just joking ...
well at least your taking notice of my work and I thank you for that you guys
- Quote :
- We do. It's just that the Networks are more willing to fund the cliched, banal, crap that everyone can relate to rather than taking a risk with those good stories that might not sell as well. That's why I find it great that the digital film boom has empowered indie film makers (with a decent story to tell) to reach a larger audience even with a very low budget.
yeah, I hate cliched stories too you know, and that's why this is my revenge to the society fill with people who makes cliched stories and show it to millions of people ... the shame
cliche stories are gay
- Quote :
- I am not the TS's agent or editor so I am not obliged to give constructive criticism (for free).
With that said, after 3 chapters, I can honestly say I've read better crap.
the story I've made breaks all the barriers of telling one story, one place, one setting even it's only a one title novel
no my friends, it is super awesome
don't read 3 chapters and then criticize
it's bad ... it's not nice
read the whole novel and then criticize
at least tell me what's really up with my story
that's all
... " just keep your day happy, hmkay "
@ salermo
- Quote :
- After reading 3 chapters, we might admit being had.
< Christoper > : dalawa na sila delay, baka naman totoo
< delay > : ...
@ sophion
- Quote :
- we filipinos dont know how to weave a good story.
and our movies suck.
you suck sophion, you suck
@ salermo
- Quote :
- Whenever I go to get my kare-kare and dinuguan at my nearby little Filipino store and a turo-turo (fingerpoint ) restaurant, I cringe when I hear their overhead T.V. with all the tear-jerkers going-on.
well salermo of not-in-the-philippines, I assume you are in abroad or somewhere, I just can say this that filipinos of wherever you are, are still in touch of their own heritage (you know, even if they suck), and for that I salute them
by the way, my favorite turo-turo ulam is bopis ... have you tried that?
@ Frake_5000
- Quote :
- mukhang susubaybayan ko na 'to...hehehe! habang binabasa ko yung bawat lines naiimagine ko sa isip ko yung eksena eh. Good work talaga, sir!
actually nasagot ko na tong reply nato dati nung first story pa lang
ito yung naging reply ko...
" gumagawa lang ako ng panibagong approach sa pagbabasa ng novel
nagke-create lang ako ng illusion na parang pinapanood sa screen habang binabasa nga lang ...
gets mo? 'wink' 'wink'
"
tapos may nag-reply ... si JosephSensei
Nice story, maari nangyayari ito sa totoong buhay.
@ dark202328
- Quote :
- ako nga din eh na imagine ko ung habang ginagahasa si brenda
hahahaha! natawa talaga ako sa reply mo
@ dark202328
- Quote :
- my tanung lang ako, naguguluhan lang ako sa kanila trivor at nelso? sino ba sakanila ang bakla.
ano sila um, discreet, or something ... di ko rin alam eh
actually nakuha ko yung ideya ng profile ni Nelson nung nabasa ko sa TV forum yung salitang bisexual, discreet male only
nung una hindi ko talaga alam ibig sabihin nung salitang discreet
meaning pala non, " maingat "
ang psychology yata nila, straight-acting sila pero mas prefer nila kapwa lalake
@ Frake_5000
- Quote :
- Ang lupet ng istorya...gusto ko yung ganito. Parating aabangan yung bawat lines. Ibang-iba! Galing mo, sir. Ikaw ba mismo author?
taanx Frake_5000
at yes, me is the author
original at kakaiba ba?
I myself find it very different from anything I've encountered
pero inin-corporate ko lang yung mga napapanood ko sa TV tulad ng southpark
@ mcrory
- Quote :
- LoL d ko maitindhan anu yan?
its a novel sir
first timer ka pa lang kasi kaya mahirap pa sayo ma-absorb yung contents
pero once nage-gets mo na, you're gonna find yourself laughing mag-isa
its weird kasi nabiktima rin ako
@ -CliFfs|.hEnSki
- Quote :
- katamad lng basahin lol
pero kung pagtyatyagaan lang daw talaga, its totally worth it
reply ni ... aki^-^
" ahahah.. pinatyagaan ko talagang basahin...hehehehe!! nakakatawa
"
@ wardestroyer
- Quote :
- d nakaka enjoy basahin amf...pero thnx na dn sa effort
ganun ba
@ cock-a-dudle
- Quote :
- ang haba tapos ang pangit ng font.
kakatamad basahin O_O
naisip ko tuloy na landian at lagyan ng colors mga letra ko pero
ganitong improvement na lang siguro < name > :
" its the content that counts na lang "
@ ~Xylitol~jAm
- Quote :
- lahat cla cnbi katamad basahin bwahaha
oo nga eh, nakaka-depress
@ wardestroyer
- Quote :
- isang napakagulong istorya....ngunit talagang magulo
may nakalimutan ka pang word ... magulo sya
@ [eL]Carim
- Quote :
- 1. No one reads it , so why post
2. why do you need to post them in different topic, you can just update it on the first thread
1. meron naman ah, sa 31 hits dati na view at least kalahati non nag-aabang ng next chapter
2. different topic kasi para ma-minimize yung volume ng contents nitong nobela
nakakatamad daw kasi para sa mga baguhan na nagbabasa
@ ~Xylitol~jAm
- Quote :
- copy paste imba to
( ito yung comment nung nagbabatukan sila Anton at Christoper )
yun kasi yung signature character nila sa video project na yon
@ best_pick
- Quote :
- wahashahahahahahaha
taanks best pick, nakakatawa ba
mas matatawa ka sa idiniagdag kong character sa nobela, si Lola
keep on reading okay
@ carlporn
- Quote :
- mabasa nga to minsan
mukang maganda ah
wala bang summary to??
summary nya is umiikot yung istorya sa buhay ng grupo nila Christoper na kumukuha ng college course ng film making ... bukod sa istorya ng mga buhay ng characters, mababasa din yung mga video projects na ginagawa nila as a group
click mo lang yung link sa baba ng FOR ALL CHAPTERS para mabasa mo yung buong istorya
@ darkralf04
- Quote :
- its kinda cool o_o
parang 2 out of ten?
... meron nga palang hidden facts itong nobela kung bakit hindi nabigyan ng mahusay na hustisya yung mga estudyante na pinatay sa second story
disturbing pero classic case sya ...
@ miss.winter
- Quote :
- ANU B TOHH??
I DON'T GET IT
SORRY
@ Uruki_takiko
- Quote :
- ...????
....di ko ma gets...
typical love story novels lang kasi nakasanayan nyo kaya medyo nawi-windang kayo sa out of this world kong nobela
@ cutie26
- Quote :
- ,,ano ba yn ang gulo...tpx gnyn pah..xorry sa author pero la nmng kwent ung story tpx bxtos pa...
may kwento kapag binasa ng buo syempre
and for the censory comment, almost wala talagang gumagawa kasi kaya i'm just offering another angle for a variety of readers na gusto ring makabasa sana ng ganitong mga situations
you know in an amateur way
@ ragefire09
- Quote :
- Pwede!
Tingin ako sa source mo.
taanx ragefire09
taanx din sa 10/10 mo
@ maldita
- Quote :
- Wow, mukhang maganda ata ito aabangan ko to linggo linggo!
try mo ring basahin yung previous first Chapters
nasa second story na kasi ito eh
... taanx sa pag-read, yaan mo, ga galingan ko pa story nato para mapasaya ikaw
@ kaxcleax73
- Quote :
- galing mo talaga nakkala ko tagal pa launching now na pala ehehhehe..tagal mag load ng vids binibitin ako heehhehe...
n e wez..congrats sa season 2 ng kwela dyaryo
huh?
kwela nobela kuya hindi kwela dyaryo po, at saka tagal mag-load ng vids?
parang wala yata ako non
... pero taanx sa congrats
@ charlie harper
- Quote :
- hahahaha!!! ayus yung kwento
ayos ba kuya
@ charlie harper
- Quote :
- naalala ko yun kaibigan ko na ngayon na sa middle east na fan ng descendents, ramones, face to face, nofx, etc. mahilig sya sa mga kwento. typical mahigit sa lahat entertaining
well hi na rin sa kaibigan mo abroad
... sabihin mo na rin sa kanya, pasalubungan ka ng babae mula abroad
@ NewYorkCubaoHardCorn
- Quote :
- @delay: maganda kwento mo kaya lang bitin--kulang sa seks en bayolens. dagdagan ng kahit katiting na libog at dugo ;-)
dude good news meron na, read mo Chapter 32 - 35
Terrorism Awareness Part 2
nandon sex and violence mo ... enjoy pare
P.S.
balat ba ng tunay na tao yung maskara mo?
kung oo, pabili ako ng dalawa
@ BongBong
- Quote :
- @delay - maganda kung gagawan mo to ng blogspot... para macompile mo mga kwento mo
actually meron na, click mo lang yung link below FOR ALL CHAPTERS
dati ginawan ko to ng blogspot sa friendster pero madalas nagloloko
kaya gumawa na lang ako sa free forum ... mabilis at madaling mag-navigate na
i-check mo kuya
@ thomasstuart
- Quote :
- Hi Dear.
I have recently join this site and this is nice idea for providing us information about Kwela Nobela. Would you mind to let us know more about this? Thanks!
this is a story of fictional situations behind the stepping stones of future film makers
although none of these are real nor based from truth to life people, the concept of this is to extract the humor out of a very very sad topic and turn it into a positive thought that anyone could relate and understand
@ Oneiros
- Quote :
- Since I'm feeling nice...
My Zen master says that while good art inspires, great art on the other hand offends. So I'm a bit amused by your attempt to satirize/trivialize serious topics like AIDS, cancer, homosexuality, etc. and it reminds me a lot of The Sarah Silverman Program or It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia. However that's where the similarities end. Dialogue is stilted and suffers from unnecessary exposition. Pop-culture references are thrown in with no discernable purpose aside from just being added into the mix. And there seems to be no overarching theme from the few chapters I've read so far, though this isn't that big of a disadvantage if you intended each chapter to be self-contained rather than be part of a coherent whole.
And it goes without saying, if you really believe in your work, edi wag ka masyado mag-paapekto sa iyong mga kritiko. Take whatever you found useful in their criticism and don't take it personally.
since I'm feeling nicer ...
and I don't have a slight idea of what you have said...
but I love the show it's Always sunny in Philadelphia
my favorite episode is when they burned Deandra while saving the kittens, on cam
actually, my inspiration in writing the story is Southpark
I'd like to capture its nastiness at the same time being hilariously funny
and about that coherent whole your talking about,
actually it is divided in a two to three pages of bond paper microsoft office word program ...
- Quote :
- And training. Everyone needs training.
mukha mo training
<< Updates of new Chapters once a week >>
enjoy people
# 6b ... after I finished posting the first story, there's this ronwits dude gave me a message that said and I quote " Nice kwento. Love it. Na print ko na chapters nya."
... take that Oneiros!!! in your face! in-your-face
") meron akong hardcore fan
plus there's this two other guys that is both curious about me if I'm a scriptwriter or something ... I told them, " no I'm not "