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PostSubject: Chapter Two   Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:55 pm

Short Film Coming
THE ORIGIN
Chapter Two

( other location )

Ann : isa sa mga pinakahihiling niya ay matagpuan ang special someone … para sa kaligayahang hindi pa natutupad, we decided na isali siya sa … MTV Globally Dismissed

( big logo )

Daisy : hi, my name is Daisy, and I’m from the beautiful country of Belgium
(edit screen)
Daisy’s voice : I can go up to a guy and talk to him about pretty much anything … and if that means flirting, then yes, I’m definitely a flirt … I would say I’m a huge risk taker and I’m very spontaneous as well

( other location )

Brent : hi, I’m Brent, and I’m your all american boy
(edit screen)
Brent’s voice : I’m also an international print model … men are pretty intimidated to me when they found out that I’m a model … I mean they should, cause I’m a real—- lady snatcher

( other location )

Paul : (ganun pa rin yung suot) ako si Paul … yo … ipinanganak sa kalye … yo … (then big smile)
(edit screen)
Paul’s voice : ako nga pala si Paul, at ang masasabi ko, walang magagawa yung kakompitensya ko laban sa akin, nasa akin na lahat
(clip) Paul’s voice : amoy ng tunay na lalake (inamoy yung kilikili then fart)
(clip) Paul’s voice : perpektong kutis (kinain yung excess na balat)
(clip) Paul’s voice : at siyempre, tamang eksperyensya (showing Paul being rape while Ann and Nelson are playing poker at the background)
Paul : tama na!!! tama na!!!

( other location )
( going to meet )

Brent : (smiled seeing Paul approaching) … this is gonna be a sweet and tough competition for me
(they now meet)
Brent : I see you’re into fashion men
Paul : yes
Brent : wait! you’re not a cannibal are you?
Paul : … yes
Brent : alright, if you say so, goodluck to you (handshakes Paul)
Paul : yes
( Daisy enters )
Daisy : hi guys, waiting for me?
Brent : hello there, my name is Brent
Daisy : hi! I’m Daisy, nice to meet you (embrace Brent)
Paul : … Paul yes, I’m handsome yes
Daisy : but of course Paul (hug Paul) … you look both amazing, amazing and different … you Brent, you look hot and sexy, I assume you must be a model
Brent : thank you, thank you and I’m a model
Daisy : really? that’s cool!
Brent : (smiling)
Daisy : and you Paul … you look really exotic, which I really like to explore and … I want to know each of you better so, c’mon
Paul : yes

( edit screen )
Guy Narrator’s voice : later, we’ll take a look of their dates as they get the heart of a pretty lady from Belgium
(t-shirt printing store)
(Brent and Paul exchange t-shirt)
Paul : (wears the t-shirt and the t-shirt says ‘Fire Victim’)
Brent : (wears also the t-shirt and the t-shirt says ‘I’m with useless’ and an arrow pointing down)

( other location )

Guy Narrator’s voice : sneek a peek with Brent’s date to Daisy alone
(showing Brent and Daisy kissing)
Guy Narrator’s voice : date of Paul with Daisy has an unexpected interruption
(showing Paul and Daisy walking … Paul gave Daisy a flower, Daisy smiled and then a holdaper point a gun to them)
Pedro and Daisy : (raised their hands)
(the holdaper gets the purse of Daisy and then point the gun to Paul … Paul gestures ‘I have nothing’ and the holdaper puts the flower from Daisy to Paul’s ear and drag Paul out of the picture)

( other location )
Guy Narrator’s voice : and finally, the dismissed
Daisy : I’m sorry baby, but you are dismissed

( other location )
( umuulan )

Ann : kahapon, nasaksihan natin ang natupad na kahilingan ni Paul … ngayon, kakamustahin na natin siya
Paul : (natutulog sa sidewalk)
Ann : Paul? … Paul
Paul : ..?
Ann : Paul, kamusta ka na?
Paul : mabute, ‘cough’ ‘cough’ mabuti naman ‘cough’ ’sipon’
Ann : anong balita kahapon?
Paul : … masaya naman kahit ‘cough’ paano ‘cough’ ’sipon’
Ann : talaga?
Paul : (nodding yes) ‘cough’ ‘cough’ ‘cough’ ’sipon’
Ann : naku, nagpapakita na yung masasamang sintomas ng malala mong saket
Paul : hinde, ubo’t sipon lang to
Ann : sshhh (shinush yung bibig ni Paul tapos hinaplos yung buhok niya) … hindi mo na kailangang sabihing may breast cancer ka
Paul : … (awkward face)
Ann : Paul, kung naging masaya ka kahapon, magiging mas masaya ka ngayon kase … eto si Dr. Christoper
Christoper : …
Ann : siya ang magsu-supply sayo ng cyanide … parang lethal injection …
Christoper : … (pinakita yung malaking injection)
Ann : yan, yan yon, parang itong lethal injection pero ang cyanide, mas matatagalan kang mamatay, in very tremendous pain … ano, handa ka na?
(then tingin kay Paul pero wala na)
Ann : … nasan na siya? (hinanap) san na siya? … ayun!
Christoper : habulin nyo!

( habang tumatakbo si Paul )
Paul : aah—-!!! aah—-!!! (tapos nadapa)
(dinaganan agad ng dalawang nurse na lalake at itinayo)
Ann : Paul, bakit ka tumakbo?
Paul : tinanong mo pa! gusto nyo kong patayin! aah—-!!!
Ann : pero may breast cancer ka
Paul : breast cancer!? breast cancerin mo mukha mo! (sinisipa si Ann pero hindi maabot … hawak nang mahigpit ng dalawang lalake)
Christoper : … (inihahanda na yung injection)
Ann : mas mabuti nato kaysa sa maghirap ka ng napakatagal sa sakit mo
Paul : ubo’t sipon lang to, isa-cyanide mo! bwiset! mga bwiset kayo!!!
Christoper : ihanda na yan
(itinuwad si Paul)
Paul : mga bwiset kayo!!! kayong lahat!!!
(hinubaran tapos tinakpan ng blur yung puwet niya, and then inilipat na lang yung blur sa mata ni Paul)
Paul : anong gagawin nyo ha!? tama na! ayoko na! ayoko na aah—!!!
Christoper : (brutal na sinaksak yung puwet ni Paul)
Paul : aah—-!!!

( blackscreen with print one by one )

- hindi mamatay-matay si Paul sa isang
- daang injection ng cyanide
- ang Diyos na lang ang nakakaalam kung kailan siya mamatay
- sa breast cancer

(end film)
( other location )
( school’s waiting shed )

Nelson : ang ganda ng skateboard mo Paul ah, patingin
Paul : (pinahiram)
Nelson : ayos to ah … ano ba ang tawag sa inyo? thrasher, thrasher ba?
Christoper : edi nag-i-skateboard
Paul : (natawa)
Christoper : wala ka kay Paul, nanalo ng championship yan sa skateboard
Nelson : kailan?
Paul : dati
Christoper : … ba’t ba tayo nandito?
Ann : basta, wag laot okey (tingin sa relos) … hintay lang tayo
Christoper : Paul, may assignment ba tayo sa Math?
Ann : uh, hate ko Math
Paul : … wala
Christoper : talaga?
Paul : oo, tinawagan ako ni sir kanina, tinanong din kung may assignment, sabi ko, wala po sir
Christoper : ..! talaga lang ah
Ann : eto na
( Mia approaching with a crew )
Nelson : anong meron?
Ann : sumulat si Mia sa isang deyting program para tulungan siyang ligawan si Paul, romantic di ba
Nelson : aww—
Mia : (natatawa) wow! natalo kayo , hindi ako makapaniwala
Paul : yes, natalo kami yes (depress) … galit ako sa mga nanalo, mamatay na sila
Mia : I agree … ganito, kakantahan na lang kita
Paul : ay mabuti pa nga
Mia : anong gusto mong kanta?
Paul : … alam mo yung bizaare love triangle?
Mia : oo
Paul : wag yon, sinusuntok ko yung mga taong kumakanta non … why do you love me? Garbage
Mia : oo, favorite ko nga yun eh
Paul : yun na lang, ops teka … (kinuha cellphone) eto sabayan mo to
Mia : … why do you love, why do you love me, why do you love me, it’s driving me crazy … (and so on…)

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