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PostSubject: Chapter 75   Sun Nov 21, 2010 10:53 pm

Short Film Coming : Negative One
"Ang Pagbabalik"
Chapter 75

(airport)
(Christoper’s Dad and his grandfather on a wheelchair is looking for Christoper)

< Christoper > : Dad!
(his Dad approach him)
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
< Christoper > : Dad ako na po
(help his grandfather push the wheelchair)
< Dad > : kamusta na nga pala yung film contest na sinalihan mo? nanalo ka ba anak?
< Christoper > : yes Dad, cash prize ang napalanunan namin
< Dad > : o ano naman ginawa mo sa pera mo
< Christoper > : ni-request ko na lang sa grupo ko na ibigay na lang yung cash prize para sa pagpapagamot ni Lola sa ospital ... ang bait nga nila eh, lahat sila pumayag
< Dad > : buti naman kung ganun
< Christoper > : nung una hindi makapaniwala si Lola Ingrasia, niloko ko kasi nung una
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
< Christoper > : ah Dad, nasan na po si Mama?
< Dad > : nauna na sa bahay, miss ka na daw nya
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
< Christoper > : (noticed something)
(‘choo!’ ‘choo!’)
(si Christoper ay nasilaw sa sobrang liwanag na tumutok sa kanya)

(other location)
(Ann’s living room)

(‘ring!’ ‘ring!’, ‘ring!’ ‘ring!’)
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
(pumunta si Ann doon at sinagot yung telepono)
< Ann > : hello?
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
< Ann > : Ma’am! kamusta na po buhay may asawa?
< Ma’am’s voice > : eto masayang-masaya, gusto ko sana kitang aanyayahan sa bahay pagbalik namin dyan sa Pilipinas
< Ann > : sige po, kailan po?
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
< Ma’am’s voice > : marami pala kaming hindi parehas ang gusto, pero syempre bow na lang ang teacher mo
< Ann > : (noticed something)
(‘choo!’ ‘choo!’)
(si Ann ay nasilaw sa sobrang liwanag na tumutok sa kanya)

(other location)
(Anton’s house)

< Anton > : (binuksan yung pinto)
< Mom > : Anton, niyaya ko nga pala si Vincent para sa hapunan
< Vincent > : (smiled)
< Anton > : (awkward face)
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
< Mom > : asikasuhin mong mabuti tong bisita natin narinig mo … (then smile) Vincent, salamat nga pala sa dagdag na pinamili mo para sa akin ah
< Vincent > : wala po yon
< Anton > : Ma! isuli nyo nga mga to, hindi ba kayo nahihiya ang dami-dami nyan
< Vincent > : Anton okey lang, pinamili nga rin pala kita neto … chocolates at saka ng Playstation 3
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
< Mom > : halika Vincent tuloy ka, pagplanuhan natin kasal nyo ni Anton
< Vincent > : (napangite then tingin kay Anton)
< Anton > : (awkward face)
(flash! … wheels of a train is suddenly seen and heard)
< Anton > : (noticed something)
(‘choo!’ ‘choo!’)
(si Anton ay nasilaw sa sobrang liwanag na tumutok sa kanya)

(other location)
(riles ng tren)
(showing a train is moving really fast)
< (close-up) Mia > : …
(showing a train is moving really fast)
(si Mia pala ay nasa gitna ng riles)
(showing front of a moving train)
< Mia > : … (tumingin lang sya sa liwanag)
(‘choo!’ ‘choo!’)
(tumutok yung liwanag kay Mia)

(other location)
(Ann’s house)
(Ann, Christoper and Anton is watching quietly the news on the couch)

< Christoper > : sino ba namang matinong tao ang titigil sa gitna ng riles

(on TV)

< Witness > : sumisigaw yung mga tao, umalis ka dyan! umalis ka dyan! pero ang sabi nya natatae na daw sya kaya dun sya tumae
(while showing in the background, Mia is dead and the paramedics are surrounding Mia)

(back to them)
< Christoper > : (noticed something)

(on TV)
(all the people is surrounding Mia’s dead body while the soul of Mia in white dress hug Paul, also in white and seems happy)

(other location)
(Ann’s room)
(there’s someone sitting on top of Ann’s bed … only the back is seen and he’s wearing a black hood)
(showing the radio beside him and push play and then he left the room)

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