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PostSubject: Chapter 72   Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:01 pm

Short Film Coming : Negative One
"Ang Pagbabalik"
Chapter 72

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Case Entry A - 2
FAMILY PROBLEM
“Divorce”
Christoper’s Group Entry

(Lola’s house)
< Anton > : Lola, sya si Atty. Maglabanan, hawak nya ngayon ang ating divorce, paper
< (zoom-in) Lola (naka-wheel chair) > : hin-de---!!!

(edit screen)
< Guy Narrator’s voice > : si Anton, sa telenobela na pi-namagatang,
(print on screen as well)
DINOBORSYO KO … LOLA KO

(back to them)
(wala na yung lawyer)
< Anton > : (lumuhod kay Lola) oh Lola, mahal pa rin kita, hindi ko kayang makitang nasasaktan ka
< Lola > : kung ganon, halikan mo ko apo
< Anton > : huh? (tumayo agad)
< Lola > : halikan mo ko apo, gaya nung dati (smooching gesture)
(close-up sa lips ni Lola)
< Anton > : pero hindi pa ko nagtu-toothbrush
< Lola > : okey lang (smooching gesture)
< Anton > : hindi pa ko nagtu-tooth brush ng sampung taon promise
< Lola > : kahit limampung taon ka pang hindi nagtu-tooth brush, lips to lips mo ko French kiss
< Anton > : (nangingiyak na lumalapit kay Lola para halikan)
(nakipag-French kiss kay Lola habang nandidiri)

(then kinausap si Lola)
< Anton > : Lola, ang totoo nito … may iba na kong mahal
< (zoom-in) Lola > : hinde---!!!
(normal view)
< Lola > : sino tong iba mong mahal apo ko? mas bata ba sya? sabihin mo! mas bata ba sya kaysa sa akin!?
< Anton > : opo Lola, mas bata sya … mas bata sya sa inyo … ng isang taon!
(then zoom-in close-up to someone)
< Trinidad (matanda ring Lola) > : kamusta na Ingrasia
< Lola > : ikaw!
< Trinidad > : tama! ako nga! at ako ang mas batang mahal ng apo mo ‘cough!’ ‘cough!’ (then zoom-in sa nanlilisik na mata ni Trinidad)
< Lola > : hindi ako naniniwala sayo, sinungaling ka!
< Trinidad > : ha! sinungaling pala huh, manood ka … Anton! lips to lips mo ko, French--- kiss
< Anton > : ano!
< Trinidad > : (lumapit kay Anton) wag ka nang mahiya baby, ipakita natin sa kanya na nagmamahalan tayo
< Anton > : pero ayoko, wala sa script to (tumingin sa mga papel na hawak nya)
< Trinidad > : shush! (tapos hinawakan ulo ni Anton, pinipilit ipagdikit yung bibig nila)
< Anton > : (nangingiyak na naman habang pilit na inilalayo yung mukha nya pero wala syang magawa habang inuubuhan sya ni Trinidad sa mukha)
(nag-French kiss sila habang nangdidiri si Anton)

(then kinausap si Trinidad)
< Anton > : nagkakamali kayong dalawa, lingid sa kaalaman nyo, meron pa kong isa pang minamahal
< (close-up) Lola > : ano!?
< (close-up) Trinidad > : ano!?
< (close-up) Anton > : ano! meron pang isa!?
(may nagbukas bigla ng pinto)

(may bagong matandang character na pumasok ... matandang lalake)
< (zoom-in) Tiborsyo > : Anton, tama na itong pagpapanggap … mahal mo ko at mahal din kita, halikan mo ko Anton, lips to lips French, kiss
(normal view)
< Tiborsyo > : …
< Trinidad > : …
< Lola > : …
(tumahimik nang sandali ang lahat … nawawala na si Anton)
< Tiborsyo > : Anton?
< Lola > : Anton?
< Trinidad > : asan na yon, kanina lang nandito ah … Anton!
< Tiborsyo > : Anton?

(other location)
(rooftop ng building)
(staffs are watching Anton about to jump)

< Anton > : ayoko sabe! lumayo kayo kundi tatalon talaga ako!
< Christoper’s voice > : Anton pag-usapan natin to
(quick cut)

(back to the scene)
(Anton and Tiborsyo are French kissing)
(then kausap kay Lola)

< Tiborsyo > : kaya Ingrasia, pirmahan mo na itong … divorce paper
< (zoom-in) Lola > : wah--- (umiyak na lang)
(fading screen)

< Guy Narrator’s voice > : panoorin muli bukas si Anton, sa pagganap sa bagong madamdaming dramang tagpo na pi-namagatang,
(print on screen as well)
- TUMINGIN KAYO
- KAKAININ KO …
- SARILING TAE KO

< Anton’s voice > : ayoko!!! hindi ko kakainin yan!!!

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