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PostSubject: Chapter 43   Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:03 pm

Short Film Coming : Negative One
" Ang Pagbabalik "
Chapter 43

(may malaking salamin si Anton sa loob ng coat)
< Anton > : ginamit ko ang araw para masilaw silang lahat
< Christoper > : ..? (tumingin sa itaas) pero Detective Anton, wala namang araw, sobrang maulap ngayon
< Anton > : ganun ba? siguro'y, napangitan sila sa kanilang mga sarili kaya, nagtakip sila ng mga mata … ang papangit kasi nilang lahat
< Christoper > : as usual isa ka talagang tunay na henyo Detective Anton
< Anton > : alam ko yun Detective Christoper, pero … (tumingin sa dagat) pano na tayo makakaalis sa lugar nato?
< (close-up) Christoper > : Detective Anton
< Anton > : … (tumingin kay Christoper)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : Detective Christoper (nod once)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Anton > : (nod once)
(they are now in the beer house already … a woman is dancing in the background)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : (nod once then look at the place)
< Anton > : (still nodding to Christoper)
< Christoper > : … Detective Anton
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : nandito na tayo
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : Detective Anton nandito na tayo!
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : (sinampal si Anton) nandito na tayo!
< Anton > : (look at the place) oo nga noh … Detective Christoper! uminom na tayo!
(then three beautiful women na naka-two piece approach them and give them beer)
< Anton > : yeah!
< Christoper > : woo!
(then they toast and drink with the ladies)
(end of film)

(other location)
(temporary subtitle)

FULL MOON
CHANGE OF MEMORY

(inside the kubeta)
(Ann and Christoper is covering their noses)

< Mia > : dito nga
< Christoper > : akala ko gimik lang to ng school para sumikat
< Ann > : walang matinong school ang gagawa ng ganitong advertisement noh!
< Mia > : kailangan kumpirmahin natin muna kung tunay ang mga tae dito
< Ann > : hindi pa ba patunay na mabaho ang …
< Christoper > : (pinigilan si Ann then nod 'no')
< Mia > : (humarap kayla Ann na may tae sa kamay) … okey, titikman ko na
< Ann and Christoper > : (nandiri face)
< Mia > : (kinain yung nasa kamay) … tae nga, tae nga tong mga to
< Christoper > : sa palagay ko, walang ganitong tae ang pusibleng meron sa isang araw lang … baka yang pader lang ang may tunay na mga tae
< Mia > : tama ka, kailangang tikman ko rin ang banda don
< Ann > : Mia!
< Christoper > : (pinigilan ulit si Ann then nod 'no')
< Mia > : (sumalok ng tae sa ibang pader tapos, kinain) … tunay din, tunay din mga tae dito … ngayon, banda don naman
< Ann > : (hinarangan si Mia) Mia tumigil ka na!
< Mia > : umalis ka dyan!!! (tinulak si Ann)
< Ann > : (bagsak sa sahig)
< Christoper > : ..!
< Mia > : (tumakbo sa ibang pader, nilamutak mga tae)

(later … outside the CR)

< Ann > : … hindi ko na talaga alam ang gagawin sa kaibigan kong yon
< Christoper > : … (tumingin sa relos)
(then may lumalabas ng mga tao sa CR)
< Mia > : hindi pa ko tapos! hindi pa ko tapos sabe! kailangan ko pang malaman lahat ng impormasyon sa CR na yan!
(hinihila palabas ng dalawang security guard)
< Mia > : ikaw! (tinuro si Ann) kasalanan mo siguro to noh! kasalanan mong maldita ka! ba't mo sila tinawag ha!? ha!!!
< Ann > : Mia (then iyak, may luha)
< Christoper > : (pinatatahan si Ann) … pakilayo na po yan
< Mia > : ayoko! ayoko!!! bitawan nyo ko!
< Ann > : (umiiyak)
< Mia's voice > : bitawan nyo ko sabe!!! gusto ko pang kumain non!
< Christoper > : kuryentihin yan!
('bzzt---!!!')
< Mia's voice > : aah---!!!

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